Scene 2
Location: Local Bar
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| Clues |
- Clue 1: dead body
- Dead, redhead,female
- Gash on neck
- Laying on the back of a car
- Clue 2: blood spot
- Type O- blood
- Clue 3A: fingerprint
- Tented arch
- Clue 4/5: drink with lipstick print
- Blue liquid (possible poison)
- Dark red lipstick
- Clue 6: fiber
- White fiber
- Cotton
- Clue 7: note
- “please help me"
- Clue 7A: note
- “I needed the money”
- Clue 8: fiber/string
- Black string
- Nylon
- Clue 9: gold jewelry
- Clue 10: Fingerprint
- Accidental whorl
- Clue 11: fingerprint
Possible victim: Ginger Snap
ü-redhead, female
ü- O- blood type
ü- Accidental whorl fingerprint
ü- Handwriting match “please help me”
ü- Bartender
Possible perpetrator: Candi Store
ü- O- blood
ü- Drug conviction (needed money)
ü- Handwriting match “I needed the money”
ü- Thief conviction (gold jewelry)
ü- Adult entertainer
Hypothesis:
Candi store was at the club (clue 4/5). She went to order a drink and saw ginger snaps necklace (clue 9 & clue 4/5). Being a drug addict and thief she plotted to steal the necklace for drug money (clue 7A). She waited until Ginger Snap got off work. Candi Store followed her out of the club. Seeing she was being followed, Ginger Snap wrote a note for help (clue7). Candi store caught up to Ginger Snap and killed her (clue 1). In the struggle blood was spilt (clue 2), fiber samples were dropped (clue 6 & clue 8), and both of them left fingerprints (clue 10 and clue 3A). Candi Store left a note saying why she killed her (clue 7A) and also dropped the jewelry (clue 9). Then she fled the crime scene.
I like how you included how the scene looked like before you started interacting with it. And the bullets make the clues very easy look at. Also the story is very nicely planned :P
ReplyDeleteGood job Matthew! I like how you included the stats for each possible victim/murderer. The only thing you could possibly do is to add pictures and maybe capitalize the names of the people? I know it's nitpicky, sorry :) This is very well thought out and your story seems to really match up with the clues!
ReplyDeleteI agree, it looks great and your story is very plausible. I really love how you added each of the clues in a bulleted list, it makes it really easy to read. If I were to add anything I would say more pictures.
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